Saturday, April 24, 2010

More Tainted

Okay here is more of Tainted:
I look up through the canopy of leafs and branches and apples. I close my eyes and stroke my hair like my mom used to. Mom. Tears begin to roll down my face Abigale, Tommy, Dad, Grandma, Grandpa. All taken from me never am i to see them again.
"Let me up please." I hear a voice shout from the ground "Briana?" I wave my hands and the branches creek down so that the voice can get up. I don't open my eyes to see who it is I hear a snake hiss by my ear. I look over Antonio was sitting next to me his forked tough slithering back behind his teeth. "You okay" he asked his glowing serpent eyes filled with concern. I wipe the tears from my face.
"No I am not thank you very much Antonio your father destroyed my LIFE!" i howl glaring at him 
"Well it is not MY fault you decided to show up to my house unannounced when you are forbidden by your parents to see me ever again or at least you where because right now it looks like i am the only friend your sorry undead hide has got!" He hissed indigently. I burst into tears then sobbing hysterically "Oh look Briana I'm sorry okay?" He whispered looking taken aback  the fire leaving his slit eyes. I shake my head and put it into my hands. I feel Antonio shake next to me unsure what to do he places his hand lightly on my back trying very hard to make me feel better which was never what he was good at. I wipe the tears from my eyes hiccuping. "I-I never have seen you cry." Antonio forced out of his lips through the surprise and shock. 

"Never had a need to." I whispered shaking on the branch hiccuping awfully. He stared at the ground which was so far away  his black hair smelled as it always had even when he was a little boy before our family mattered and the battle started between dark powered people and light powered people.  He looked up his face inches from mine his noise smaller than normal people but still it was there. His lips pushed out a bit  just off the middle were is fangs hung and his lower teeth should be but where not. His eye brows connected then one went up. I realized i am staring at him  i turn my head up and look at the moon.  He sighed I hear his large leathery wings shift on his back.

"I have to go soon my father will be angry." He says looking up at the moon

"Well we don't want your daddy getting angry do we tell him i hate him." I snap and jump from the tree leaving my only friend in the world sitting in the tree. I race up to my room fighting back tears.



  1. I quite like this story you have made. It makes you want to read more.

    Hope you put more up!

  2. thank you sorry for not posting on here a lot